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First Breath After Coma | G | Harvey Specter/Mike Ross

Sep 13, 2011 16:23

First Breath After Coma | G | Harvey Specter/Mike Ross (Suits) | short | Nothing was ever fine between them, Mike always had one foot out the door. | A/N: I wanted break up fic. So I wrote it. Title from Explosions In The Sky's song by the same name.

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loverstar September 13 2011, 08:34:44 UTC

God it hurts but i love it!!!

hips_xx_hearts September 14 2011, 05:22:12 UTC

thanks!

bdr28 September 13 2011, 13:46:02 UTC

I can FEEL my heart breaking, but at the same time... OMG! <3

bdr28 September 13 2011, 13:46:51 UTC

I need a suits icon. haha, right now I've got Cassidy, Kris, Merlin or Tommy.

hips_xx_hearts September 14 2011, 05:25:15 UTC

heee thanks. idk if i should have included more details about their actual relationship, maybe. but i'm happy with it. i missed this writing style so much. my creative writing teacher hated passive narratives >_

searisme December 12 2011, 18:02:22 UTC

I've seen this fic around for a while, and avoided it because- yeah. The premise. Breakup fic.
But you make it make sense. It actaully feels like catharsis when Mike walks out. And listening to the song at the same time gives it just that little bit more feeling. (((also, thanks for reminding me of the song, I hadn't listened to it for an age and a half.)))