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[notetoself09]

Title: In the club part 1
pairing: GDYB, seungsong, todae
rating pg-13
disclaimer: i own no one and nothing.

Comments

[qw_luph_pachul]

correct me if i'm wrong does lee seunghyun is top real name right???

mmmhhh.... i thought the underage man is seungri....but it's not...

and... gdyb part is pure win!!!!!!!!!!!

why g_d congrats yb??? is it b'coz he doesn't repp to g_d kiss???

owww the lats part is amazing... make me so curious and wanted to see the next part faster... write more honey...

[notetoself09]

seungri's real name is lee seunghyun
tops is choi seunghyun

so the underaged man is seungri :)

gd congrats yb because he won their dance battle.

Thank you so much for reading! sorry if my story is too confusing!

i'm glad you like it so far!

[aeropi]

whyyy whhyyyy did you not advertise this fic on the bigbang_fanfic website?! I've been keeping my eyes out for good writing and you hid it here! ;__;!!

anyways, I really enjoyed this! Woohoo~ I hope you have more parts coming out soon. As soon as I read Teddy's description of Daesung I just KNEW I had to comment :D And Seungri being totally rich, lol! I didn't see that coming! I liked the comparison of angel vs. demon for maknae and his boytoy xD

And TOP's characterization was lovely. Him and YB, straight squares, having to suffer the likes of Jiyong and a gay club are very hilarious. I would DEFINITELY like to see more of this! Keep going!

[notetoself09]

lol thank you very much but this isn't very good writing *hangs head in shame*

lol i love Seungri's devilish side he just looks naughty lol. And Daesung just looks so innocent and happy with that smile.

...I wish i was Seungri's boytoy, but i guess i never could be because i'm a girl lol

Thank you for the comment!!<3

[aeropi]

lol earlier I posted this comment with a different username that i def. don't use. ;__; sorry if it confused you any. if it didn't...then...please ignore this xD