Fic: Still

Jun 25, 2009 21:54

AN: Jesse/Riley fic for tl__dr, who is a beautiful, unique snowflake. This turned out a bit darker than I expected, but that's kind of the nature of this ship. I also apologize about the lack of porn. Unnnngh, Jesse is so FIERCE and manipulative. And hot. I should write more about her.

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tl__dr June 26 2009, 19:25:25 UTC
jdlkjaklsfdjlkasdf This is fucking gorgeous, man. The imagery is intense, and so ominous and dark and hints at both her past and her future (I'm still not all caught up so I don't know how explicit the Riley backstory gets, but this resonated so much with what I've seen so far). And I loved how well you conveyed Jesse's easy, unassumingly irresistible sexuality, and the way they're close - as in, they're in close proximity, spend a lot of time together - yet not really intimate, not quite. SUPER AWESOME AND LOVELY LOVELY BASICALLY, thank you so so so much!

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notexotic June 27 2009, 00:29:49 UTC
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I am THRILLED that you liked this. It was fun to write, and I think I may actually really like Riley now. OH, HOW THINGS HAVE CHANGED.

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tl__dr June 27 2009, 01:08:19 UTC
It made me like Riley more than I ever knew, too! OH WELL-WRITTEN POVS, YOU ARE SO ALL-POWERFUL.

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arkeis07 June 27 2009, 10:12:04 UTC
gah, this was fantastic. So vivid, i saw everything so clear in my mind. Amazing.

I'll be keeping an eye out for you. me = fan.

:D

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notexotic June 27 2009, 14:50:31 UTC
Awww, thank you!

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livrelibre June 28 2009, 17:38:39 UTC
This was great, just the kind of Jesse/Riley I so rarely see.

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notexotic June 29 2009, 00:21:54 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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