Hell's frozen over.

[notfeelinclever]

Had a dream, resulting in some (old!) stuff to get off my chest about an ex of mine. Phew! So rather than rant I (gasp!) wrote a poem. It's not awful(ly original), but oh well. I guess I want feed back since it's my first go at this sort of thing. Smack my bitch up

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[k80fs]

likey likey--i got a huuuuuuuge kick out of "awful(ly original)", and i was still laughing into the Starbucks-world-domination line.

comments:
1. i want the "dregs" to be of something more metaphorical than "what you thought you could live with and fuck you."

2. i don't think non-fat no-whip lattes are very yummy. yes. yes, i did think it was important to mention that.

3. i can't find it now (damn 7am), but the bad-at-goodbyes-and-you line is fookin killer.

4. sharp ending.

again, likey likey.