you are a heart with one bad wheel

[nothinglorious]

i see the fence
where is the gate
the ravens keep tapping
at the one way mirror
when will they leave the tower
they scare away the larks

who put their silverware in my parachute

Comments

[loljosh]

I am aware of the obstacles
how may I go about finding a solution
many troubles keep surfacing from nowhere
as if fate or some cosmic force sneers at me
when will I return to myself?
I do so miss the honesty and beauty of pure life.
--
honestly, the best line of the entry is the last.
it lacks a ? but it's very succinct and vivid to me.

[nothinglorious]

that sounds much deeper than what i was thinking.

[nothinglorious]

you were right on for the first 3 lines. the end is not about returning, its about moving forward

[nothinglorious]

and the fate/cosmic force is way off

[loljosh]

it's called interpretation.
when you create art and share it with other people, it's meaning is no longer wholly yours anymore.

duh, ass.

[nothinglorious]

excuse me, i was just being a jackass