That's more like it

[notintheseheels]

Comments

[devalmont]

"I actually write like
something rolling about at random on the keyboard, possibly in pain "

That's the verdict on the first two chapters of my novel, which is a distinct improvement on the last one which gave me Dan Brown. Brrr...

[farnam]

I actually write like:
a moonstruck lunatic possibly actually wearing a straightjacket

I quite like the idea of being a moosstruck lunatic, possibly actually. Far more fun and prosaic than being a sun-struck lunatic anywa, which would be a very sad state of afairs

[alan1957]

I'll have'ter give that a go...when I have access to somefing wot I've wrote.

[palmer1984]

"I actually write like an adolescent goth after a heavy night on the absinthe"

I got that from a politics post!

[lupie_stardust]

Apparently, I actually write like someone about to go on a killing spree.

I have actually hurt something laughing.