validation pt 6

Jul 12, 2012 12:35

Title: Validation
Chapter: 6/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: primarily Kris/Luhan, this chapter includes Kai/Sehun, Luhan/Sehun
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth ( Read more... )

!!: i will add more relevant tags later, fic: exo, exo, random: fanfic

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moryangi July 12 2012, 03:54:47 UTC
Literally spazzed when I saw you had updated. My happy feels are overwhelming at the moment.

Also, why so short and cliff-hanger-y? Wtf yoona doing here? Whats up with the red marks on luhan's wrist? Why is Kai freaking out in the room (as opposed to leaving)? What exactly did Kai do, that pissed Sehun off? Why is the book made of Kai's skin? Does the book belong to Kris now? What is he going to do with the book?

... My spazzes have now switched to utter confusion and longing for the next chapter.

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notochrasy July 12 2012, 05:16:38 UTC
sobs its not really supposed to be short but last chap was super long and worst and this chapter is just dialogue so it goes a lot faster ;A; its like one of those in between moments that doesn't warrant its own chapter but coz im ocd and have a 2 chapter interchange between kris and luhan ..I couldn't do it any other way OTL OTL OTL

Yoona is there cos kris called her at the end of chapter 4 ;; but she's not important. It's the favor that is important ;; Marks on luhan's wrist comes from when Kai pinned him down and he struggled. Kai's door is locked oops lol. Double locking system since he's never been restricted by doors, the outside lock is always on.. kinda missed that lulz. More about the kai book and the kai sehun relationship will be revealed next chapter with kris bAck in the North wing. ;A;

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moryangi July 12 2012, 06:03:12 UTC
I knew I should have reread the last chapter... Curse my impatience lol

and no worries about length and such. I can understand; Its a setup chapter. Also, I would rather have a small fix like this than be going through continually worsening withdrawals until my drug of choice (e.g. your story) is finally placed in front of me, but I can't enjoy it because by that time I am simply a puddle fangirl girls feels and unrestrained excitement/anticipation.

So ya... I kind of like you and this story a lot is the conclusion of this message =D lol

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notochrasy July 12 2012, 11:49:50 UTC
lol I should write and post faster so that readers don't forget what happens in the previous chapter ;w;

well good news, because chapter 7 is already underway and already half finished, so your withdrawals will not be happening this time (I hope lol)

I'm so happy you like it ;w; knowing that this story is being appreciated makes it such a joy to write ;w;
thank you so much for reading and commenting <33

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celleyou July 12 2012, 04:17:10 UTC
O: omgomgfangirlinglajf;dsjfsdljfs Kris and Luhan and Sehun and Kai and Lay and oh my oh my. These cliffhangers are literally killing me. I can't wait to see what's next :D

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notochrasy July 12 2012, 11:53:00 UTC
IDK WHY THINGS KEEP ENDING WITH CLIFFHANGERS ;A;
but lol, I think things will pick up the pace from here :) thanks for reading and commenting <3

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vipjuly July 12 2012, 11:56:59 UTC
So happy to see this updated ㅠㅠ i cant leave a proper comment on my phone at 5am but i wanna let you know that this is brilliant and you're doing a great job :) ♥

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julyfix July 12 2012, 11:59:53 UTC
I meant to leave this comment under this username sdfjjfsasdfgs
Also, I'm recommending this fic officially to everyone 8) so brilliantly crafted and the plot and the characters and fghhgfgh yes. Yes.

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notochrasy July 12 2012, 16:42:48 UTC
LOL that's fine.
Oh wow, I'm so honoured ;w; but lol don't be surprised if the people you recommend it to don't quite like it. I've found that my writing style can come across not so...inviting LOL.
but thank you <3

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julyfix July 12 2012, 18:36:24 UTC
lmao i don't wanna sound stuck up or forward but usually people who like my writing will like something like this :) so no worries!! <33

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jyusou July 12 2012, 15:10:36 UTC
notochrasy July 12 2012, 16:49:36 UTC
LOL, I dramatically sigh everytime I post an update XD

There's going to be more sekai.... 8D can't just leave it at that lol. But yeah their relationship (as you will find out next chapter) is somewhat...strained lol. I really enjoy reading your comments and seeing how you interpret the story XD
Well, sometimes people are brought together in the most awkward of places, half naked too XD So much misunderstanding between them though tch lol.

The favor is very important...... :D
But it's good that you're over thinking things. Because nothing....nothing is what it seems~
lol update will be soonish, hopefully before the weekend ends at least. I kinda want to get this next chapter out fast! XD

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geniebsmart July 12 2012, 16:24:21 UTC
I FINALLY CAUGHT UP ON THIS FIC ;A;

This has been an awesome read so far. Did not expect SeKai as brothers lol! And the human skin omg /shivers

Can't wait for more chapters :D Keep up the good job! <3

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notochrasy July 12 2012, 16:40:59 UTC


Well, technically not blood brothers, but they grew up together quite close....will be more in the next chapter lol.
Yes...human skin...it is quite...gross ;w;

thank you for reading and commenting <3 and I will do my best!

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