validation pt 8

[notochrasy]

Title: Validation
Chapter: 8/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: primarily Kris/Luhan (not so much in this chapter though)
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth

Comments

[cairistiona]

Luuuu Haaaaaaan! Mwahahahaha I predicted that.

:D

Baby Zitaoooooooo. /cuddles

/tweets what she comments (I am a simple person.)

[notochrasy]

some things are best kept simple ;) HAHA

Haha that's good that you predicted it, so it's not something that I completely pulled out of thin air hahaha.

[cairistiona]

Haha yes, like you getting the same comment twice. Because I can. :)

I didn't really predict it until the end of last chapter/beginning of this one, but suddenly everything made sense in hindsight. :) Which is a good thing!

[notochrasy]

yeah, it became a bit clearer when Yixing brought up that there was a problem with Luhan I think, a fair few people have speculated that it was Luhan who knocked over the mug too so haha, I'm using exo fan's pre knowledge of EXO having superpowers as their concept to stir up speculation in my story :3

[ext_1373658]

I really love this. The portrayal of the characters, the pace- everything is amazing. And the story-line is really unique and fresh. I look forward to reading more! :)

[notochrasy]

I'm glad the pace is okay, I always feel conflicted about pace lol. Thanks for reading and commenting <3

[jocoloveyunho]

babe~~!
I miss u so much!
I am very busy the last few days, I'm working part time! But I don't forget to read your fanfic.
you write very good, I really like this fic!
Hwaiting!

[notochrasy]

ohh working part time? what do you work as? :)
i'm happy you like this fic <3 thank you for reading and commenting!!

[moonshine19]

(hi, i'm late gain~!)

I KNEW IT!!!!! I KNEW YOU WOULD MAKE SOME TWIST WITH LUHAN!
HAH!
okay, this chapter is awfully amazing as expected from you <33
if i were kris, I might go insane lol it's like the whole world is a lie to him xDD

keep up the good work!

[notochrasy]

HAHA. yes the twist XD It's good that people were getting suspicious before hehehe :P
thank you thank you so much <33

Hahaha yeah, I would go insane too. SO MUCH DECEPTION HAHA.
thank you for reading and commenting !! :)

[tyreling]

Oh wow, this is an amazing fic. So far I'm enjoying the sci-fi and pseudo-science-y stuff mentioned in the fic [even though I absolutely have no idea what you're talking about, except that they made sense]. I also love how you switch from Kris to Lu Han in the story. The tone is different for both of them.

And perhaps because Lu Han is actually a suppressed Invalid, all the other Invalids seem to like him more? And what's with Jongin and Sehun pinning Lu Han down? Trying to pass off their scent to him or something? XDD

This whole fic makes me go Kris<3Kris<3Kris to Lu Han<3Lu Han<3Lu Han to Tao<3Tao<3Tao and omg I cannot chose.

Considering you wrote this without actually focusing on the romance part for Kris/Luhan, I think it's best if you take down that note of them as pairing. Or just say something like they're platonic life partners in a sense. XD Despite that, I'm so looking forward to the next installment. <3

On a side note, there are some typos in the story. But nothing too bad.

[notochrasy]

A lot of the pseudo science I've been splashing in is based on real science, so, as long as it makes sense...all is good haha! The switching wasn't purposely done at first, but it kinda just happened that way lol, it's going to have to change at some point or else there's just gonna be a lot of filler content in the next few chapters XD