validation pt 9 - a new epoch

[notochrasy]

Title: Validation
Chapter: 9/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: no real pairing (Lay/Luhan friendship is littered through out)
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth

Comments

[moonshine19]

THIS IS UGH
2900 WORDS I'M DYING WITH CLIFFHANGER!!

I really like the first part. imaginable metaphor with less complicated narration(if compared to ones written before) haha :))

[notochrasy]

SORRY T_T HOW TO END WITH NO CLIFFHANGER? IDEK.

Haha yeah, I think a lot of the extremely wordy narration necessary to basically paint what the story's world is like is already complete, so it's definitely less complicated haha :D

[yukichi_1004]

you... have no idea.... how many times i came to your profile wondering if you had updated.... just to see nothign
*.*

I was BEYOND ecstatic to see that you updated today
BUT THATCLIFFHANGEROHMYGOODNESS

but okay.... i recognize something here /without having to re-read other chapters omfge lol/
chen said that only the invalids normally experienced discomfort. and lulu dear experienced it. so. wow. poor guys always get like this?

coz lu has the same thing tao had. /if i remember correctly lol//the super cool sounding scorpion thing lasdfjlskd/
so.... yeah....
would people try to pry into his past now?
oh god KRIS. GET THE FUCK BACK ;ALDFKAHSDAOUSDAHFNMSDARIFUAFJNS
YOUR FRIENDS ARE FREAKING BLEEEDDING

[notochrasy]

I'm so sorry for taking so long ;____;

Yup, what you've picked up is mostly correct. I tried to tie thing in without referring too much to old information (since it's been months LOL) but the symptoms that Luhan is experiencing....not exactly common.
While Invalids do experience discomfort because of the low frequency electromagnetic pulse, it really is only that...pure discomfort, or what I've called it in the past "bioelectromagnetic burden". Luhan is a special...incident lol, I think if what had happened was anything like what would usually happen with Invalid cases, it would ring alarm bells with Baek and Kyungsoo ;__; and Yixing probably could've made a diagnosis, but at that point, he's confused as everyone.

Yup, Luhan's past will slowly be revealed....and then it will become more clear that it's not just the dental equipment that threw Luhan into such a..intensely....sickening spell.... >_<

lol, Kris is so dumb, now he has to play catch up with so many people to find out what is going on.

[yukichi_1004]

oh god that's right lmfao
i'd forgot that kris would have to play catch up.
i hope no one doesn't try to retain info ;a;

[notochrasy]

thank you for your comment!
update is coming up in the next few days, just have one thing to tie up before I can post it :D