validation pt 11

Mar 19, 2013 12:45

Title: Validation
Chapter: 11/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: it's complicated (originally Luhan/Kris)
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth ( Read more... )

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jyusou March 19 2013, 04:29:37 UTC
notochrasy March 19 2013, 06:38:41 UTC
Ooooh you're graduating so soon! congrats ( ... )

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marchleaf March 21 2013, 18:32:59 UTC
UPDATE OMG THANK YOU
srsly i always look forward to these updates bc even though they take a little they are always so good. i love this story and omg it's so interesting and well thought out sdlkfjasdlkgg
i'll be waiting for the update <3

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notochrasy March 23 2013, 09:31:06 UTC
LOL NO, THANK YOU FOR PUTTING UP WITH MY SLOW UPDATING T-T
I'm very grateful that you like the story ;w; thank you for reading and commenting <3

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yukichi_1004 March 23 2013, 00:21:20 UTC
IM FREAKING OUT
NOT JUST COZ YOU FREAKING UPDATED JESUS I LOVE YUOU!!!!
butbut
EXPIRATION DATE ASLKDHASLDKH
PROFESSOR WAN ISAN INVALID???/ wai.
wait
WAAIIIT.
oh my godoness wats happening
so you managed to make me freak out several times throughout this chapter. and although i remember good good chunks of every other cahpter im gonna freaking re-read everything again. [maybe even take notes of things lol and put em on a sticky note]
i. wow. WOW.
i cant function properly right now. this fic is insane. in the most proper way possible. those that make sense?
holy fuck. idk what to think about joonmyun. lol. or all these secrets.
holy crap.
i love you and this fic
im actually studying biology. it's a fucking bitch.
im not doing all that well. but then again, if i get out. what the fuck am i going to do? so yah. lol. i just hope im dont end up being one of the people who are about to graduate on their major to just decide to back out last minute T___T.
i think i might just get murdered by my family, no joke.

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notochrasy March 23 2013, 10:03:23 UTC
THERE'S SO MUCH HAPPENING IDEK ( ... )

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sanctuairee March 24 2013, 21:54:52 UTC
LKSJLAKSFLASF and shit hits the fan ( ... )

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notochrasy March 25 2013, 00:59:50 UTC
yup pretty much ( ... )

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sanctuairee March 25 2013, 04:27:20 UTC
ah! so luhan's mom must've known about professor wan then
it's so weird to think of joonmyeon as this heartless considering he's such a prince but then it kindof works?
oh poor luhan. i have this idea that favona will want possession of luhan asap and kris'll have to be the one to carry it out but he'll alert trident and there'll be this big escape plan involving all the invalids teaming up and maybe baekhyun with his inventions

yeah that's what i've heard as well. i've managed to secure a volunteer position at a lab so i'm going to work my way up there, and start putting effort into networking and hopefully that'll be enough to overlook/make up for my grades.
the whole transition from highschool to university is so rushed and there's no real preparation for it and i really think there should be.
anyway, thank you :) i think i just needed to get an outside view on things

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notochrasy March 25 2013, 09:46:55 UTC
yes, it's safe to say luhan's mom would've known about professor wan. it would be a nasty secret to keep >.lol yeah i had to villainize someone and i thought i would pick him. i don't read much other exo fic so i don't know how other people usually characterise him but i just figured it work out…somehow haha ( ... )

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roughly_yours March 30 2013, 06:56:40 UTC
Oh my goodness, I am OBSESSED and head-over-heels in love with this fic!
Your descriptions are beautiful! I love your style of writing. I really could feel the tone that you're setting in the different scenes! I love the characters too! I was hoping for a little more interaction betwen them though >_< I'm guessing that's about to happen soon though haha. Kai is just too freaking awesome! (I'm secretly Team Kai T_T) I can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Luhan and Kris though! So excited!

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notochrasy March 30 2013, 12:16:48 UTC
T-T I'm so happy that you like this. Sometimes I feel like my writing style isn't that accessible because of how much irrelevant shit I put in mixed with all the scientific jargon hahaha.

And yes there will be more interactions between the other characters soon I hope hehe :) I think Kai (and especially Kai x Sehun's story arc) are quite well liked in this. And he'll definitely be playing an important role soon! :D

thank you for reading and commenting ;w;

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