"A hero is somebody who gets other people killed..."

[notoriousbkc]

Read the previous installments here.

“Fuck you, you fucking ghost,” I mumble.

“How many times do I have to tell you… it’s ‘revenant,’ not ‘ghost.’ Ghosts are immaterial, while I,” he said slapping his hand on my desk for emphasis, “am quite substantial.”

I wish I knew who this asshole was. Before he had his throat ripped open, JR liked to

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[delazan]

I point to the ‘No Smoking’ sign on the wall. JR just looks at me with a ‘what are you going to do, kill me’ expression.

Show the reader what this exoresssion looks like.

Other than that, awesome!
-L.