Brilliant, just brilliant. So Stevie already feels comfortable enough with Xabi to confess his real thoughts about leaving, where the move could be and how it'll impact his relationship with Fernando. The line about how no one as hot as Xabi could be in to him as well is such a tease for what will happen later.
Xabi and Sergio continue to play a dangerous game, new to the city and already tangled up in a complicated situation with their only native friends and guides. Stevie warning Sergio off Nando was interesting, he clearly meant it but we've already gotten the sense his heart isn't in the relationship despite all his protests to the contrary
You are very on point with your 2nd paragraph. It is a very tricky web those two are weaving to be sure, but to be fair, Nando & Stevie are pulling them into it a bit.
I'm so glad you are still loving it! Chapter 4 is up now & has some very interesting Stevie & Xabi bits in it.
Ooh, exciting new installment - I like the developments!
It's so interesting how you constructed the budding relationships. They are at a similar stage, but somehow in a completely different situation. I love Fernando and Sergio's easy friendship, and honest and slightly dorky Sergio is a favourite of mine. I'm very curious how this is gonna develop, esp. because we know now that both feel attracted to the other.
Although I agree that Stevie has to tell Fernando asap, I do understand him. He must feel very conflicted between the fierce urge to love and protect Fer (guess it has something to do with Fer's past?) and his need to leave Detroit... Interesting that he confesses in Xabi, I take it as proof that he feels some kind of connection, too.
Carra's cameo was great btw, he's quite perceptive! And funny :)
Although I agree that Stevie has to tell Fernando asap, I do understand him. He must feel very conflicted between the fierce urge to love and protect Fer (guess it has something to do with Fer's past?) and his need to leave Detroit... Interesting that he confesses in Xabi, I take it as proof that he feels some kind of connection, too.
Yes to everything about this comment & that's all I can say about that right now.
I'm glad you picked up on the parallels between the budding relationships between Xabi and Stevie & Fernando & Sergio, it'll become very important later.
awhhhhh I'm so excited that you have started a new fic!! I was on holidays and that's the best return present!! I will comment in the next part because I want to read it carefully! But I needed to say that you made my day, girl! Thanxs a lot!.
I love how they all basically have had thoughts (or more than that) about someone they shouldn't, and I am sure Stevie/Fernando will come to a head sooner or later
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Xabi and Sergio continue to play a dangerous game, new to the city and already tangled up in a complicated situation with their only native friends and guides. Stevie warning Sergio off Nando was interesting, he clearly meant it but we've already gotten the sense his heart isn't in the relationship despite all his protests to the contrary
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I'm so glad you are still loving it! Chapter 4 is up now & has some very interesting Stevie & Xabi bits in it.
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It's so interesting how you constructed the budding relationships. They are at a similar stage, but somehow in a completely different situation. I love Fernando and Sergio's easy friendship, and honest and slightly dorky Sergio is a favourite of mine. I'm very curious how this is gonna develop, esp. because we know now that both feel attracted to the other.
Although I agree that Stevie has to tell Fernando asap, I do understand him. He must feel very conflicted between the fierce urge to love and protect Fer (guess it has something to do with Fer's past?) and his need to leave Detroit... Interesting that he confesses in Xabi, I take it as proof that he feels some kind of connection, too.
Carra's cameo was great btw, he's quite perceptive! And funny :)
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Yes to everything about this comment & that's all I can say about that right now.
I'm glad you picked up on the parallels between the budding relationships between Xabi and Stevie & Fernando & Sergio, it'll become very important later.
thanks, as always, for the lovely comment!
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