Detroit Waves (Chapter 6)

Oct 01, 2011 10:24

Title:Detroit Waves (Chapter 6/14 ( Read more... )

fernando torres, steven gerrard, sergio ramos, xabi alonso, fic

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elizaberglund October 1 2011, 17:07:57 UTC
ooooooooooh! poor Fer! Stevie! How could you! And poor Sergi who feel used now:(

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notoriousjk October 9 2011, 17:12:55 UTC
everyone is so messed up, sadly its going to take a little while to fix them all.

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kfunk22 October 1 2011, 17:25:04 UTC
oof. did not see that coming.
these boys - so fucked up! i foresee a bit of angst on the horizon. yum.

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notoriousjk October 9 2011, 17:13:25 UTC
oh yes, there is much angst to come, as you shall see.

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vitaminbjorner October 1 2011, 17:52:57 UTC
I will write you a proper comment sometime later as i don't have time now. I just feel like I don't have the time right now to let you know just how much I loved it.

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notoriousjk October 9 2011, 17:13:39 UTC
thank you.

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narusaku4vr October 1 2011, 21:41:38 UTC
I wanted Fer to go to Sergio but I was not expecting that it would turn out like this. I am tearing up right now. Everybody is broken. :(

Lovely as always.

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notoriousjk October 9 2011, 17:14:23 UTC
yes everyone is broken, and it'll take a little while to fix them. thank you :-)

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ususuium October 1 2011, 21:51:13 UTC
Wow, I certainly didn't expect this and I don't like this development of the story either. Everything feels just wrong!

Sure, disappointment and anger and hurt must have hit Fernando really hard, especially after he had decided to start a new life with Steven and wanted to surprise him with his plan. And I know when, after being hurt, you may feel this aching desire in your stomach to hurt back and you find yourself unable to resist this desire. But this usually ends in a circle of hurting each other and leaves both parties broken. It's always sad when a good relationship has to end like this, maybe Steven and Fernando will never be able to look back at their relationship without feeling betrayed.

Also, the sex may have destroyed the friendship between Sergio and Fernando. Poor Sergio...he wanted Nando, but certainly not like this...
They are all colleagues, what's going to happen when Xabi, Sergio and Nando will meet up for work again?

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notoriousjk October 9 2011, 17:17:36 UTC
And I know when, after being hurt, you may feel this aching desire in your stomach to hurt back and you find yourself unable to resist this desire. But this usually ends in a circle of hurting each other and leaves both parties broken.

well yes pretty much. Sometimes break ups aren't done privately in silent hurt & mourning, sometimes it's very hot & explosive & damaging & sometimes it's done by the people you don't expect. Fernando has a lot of issues, which you will see eventually, and he's far from perfect, in fact no one is perfect here.

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