Untitled poem

[notshynemorz]

Poem that i found undone in a program i have, so started to add to it...and still in the process of adding to it. Let me know what you guys think. Need FEED BACK

Comments

[cinematicluv]

i like the ending of it better tahn the begining

[cinematicluv]

*than

idk the ending sounds like something to look forward to ya know; like there will be more after you read it.

[notshynemorz]

yeah i know...i still havn't finished it yet. Still working on it. haha.

[bellabonita88]

talent you posses my young padwan

[notshynemorz]

hehe...thank you my dear. : )