A Shoulder To Cry On

[notsoshortcutie]

This is the short story that I had to write for English... It made my mom cry and I did let a few tears out too... It's really long... But I want to know what everyone thinks of it... The main idea is about Kait's mom... I added some to it because my teacher didn't want it to be completely true... That's also why I changed the names... Comment

Comments

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[michele81489]

really great story amanda Michelle Mccormick!....miss you...hopefully we can hang out over april vacation if ur not doin anythin....i miss u.....again great story....i g2g but call if u wana....<3 Always Michele

i hardly know what to say...

[bellefleurx]

Amanda, the entire time that i was reading that, tears were streaming down my face :( i dont even think you could imagine what it meant to me that you were there for me during that time.. wow.. i dont even know what to say... that was so well written and i feel pretty important that you wrote your story based on something that happend to me and my family.. thats the thing, no one really understands what it is like to lose someone so important, especially a mom, and its like, you dont know what it feels like until it happens to you.. when i was reading you story, all the memories of those nights came flashing back.. it made me remember not wanting to believe that she was really gone and that she would just wake up and tell me that everything was going to be okay... it just didn't feel like it was real at all... i dont know.. it felt like it was just a dream and i would wake up and everything would be okay and me and jen and my mom and dad would be a happy family

[bullt_chapstick]

omgsh amanda, i remember the exact day i found all of this out, and i felt horrible and i felt like i just wanted to hug "emma" and tell her everything would be ok.

this story must mean alot to both you and her.

youre an awesome friend amanda.

i miss you.

way to make me cry!