I just noticed that, though I commented on this the day it was posted, LJ ate my comment, because it's not there.
Suffice to say, I liked it. For some reason it reminded me of Narnia, but don't ask me why. I am in love with the sentence about "my family is recognizable only by labels".
Damn. I had more in-depth critique the first time around, I swear. *kicks Livejournal*
I hate when LJ eats comments. It's a freakin' behemoth. I'm glad you liked it (despite your lack of complexity) and there are a lot of sentences that I'm in love with in this story. It's one of my babies ^^*
Narnia? Hmm. Which book(s)? I thought it more like Lord of the Flies, given the killing and hierarchial structure. I think I spelled that word wrong. Whoops.
Anyhoo - I'd've been talking to you all week, but a friend of mine is staying over, so I'm IM-less. ;_; But I'll chat with you as soon as I can, promise love. :D
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Suffice to say, I liked it. For some reason it reminded me of Narnia, but don't ask me why. I am in love with the sentence about "my family is recognizable only by labels".
Damn. I had more in-depth critique the first time around, I swear. *kicks Livejournal*
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Narnia? Hmm. Which book(s)? I thought it more like Lord of the Flies, given the killing and hierarchial structure. I think I spelled that word wrong. Whoops.
Anyhoo - I'd've been talking to you all week, but a friend of mine is staying over, so I'm IM-less. ;_; But I'll chat with you as soon as I can, promise love. :D
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