Dare; Drabble

[noughsaid]

Title: Dare
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Author: noughsaid
Word Count: 603 words
Genre: Fluff
Summary: A dare wherever it takes!

Comments

[noughsaid]

Space for my mom (:
signorina_klutz

[signorina_klutz]

Mine. Back Off.

Junsu's spin the waggle was epic. LOL.
Is it just me, or maybe Jae had plan it all. LOL.
Yun is soooo CUTE.
-huggles you- Do more!

[noughsaid]

Yours. <3

I know! He's just too squishy, too fluffy, too cute. too ARGH.
Of course not! It would be an unladylike.
Off course he is. <3

*huggles you back* I will!
Thank you reading and commenting!

[jungmin]

lol this is funny xD they sound like middle schoolers (i think) i like how the beginning flow started and eventually got to the end but it looks like it suddenly changed from third person to first person with Yunho's POV o.o;; not sure if that was intentional lol

also i notice:
“Where I am when that happened?” uhhh.... do you mean 'where was I when this/that happened?'

sorry i don't mean to question some parts of it but the majority was so fluffy and i like it alot :)

thank you for sharing this^^

[noughsaid]

That was totally unintentional! I would never notice it until you mention that point of views *pout*
Oh, thank you for correcting that! *runs to edit*
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[jungmin]

ok then xD i'm still sorry for pointing it out but you're welcome :)

[noughsaid]

Oh no! Don't be! *shooks head* I'm a new writer, and it's really fine with me that my mistakes are being pointed out so I could do something with them. :)
You just did the right thing!

:)

[noughsaid]

He was too embarrassed by it. *giggles*
He's not suppose to get kiss yet! LOL. *whispers* though I think he already got some from Yunho. *grins*
Thank you for reading and commenting!

[noughsaid]

*giggles* They are just kids! We shouldn't teach them things like that. But... they need privacy maybe that's why Jae ran away :)

[miszc]

Awww You!! thats cuteeeee!! :)
But its tooo short!!! :(
But i <3 it!! :D Oh my shy shy 'devilish' Jae! :D

[noughsaid]

Really? Aw. Thank you!
This is my first fanfic, and I'm glad that you liked it!
Oh Jae. *giggles*

thanks for reading and commenting!

[tehah_hero]

xD fluffy~ >///<

[noughsaid]

^^ I'm so happy, then!

Thanks for reading and commenting!