i doubt youll read this but...

[nova_is_a_star]

i close them all out; all my truth i conceal along the inseam of my jeans faded

Comments

[arriflax]

beautiful.

[nova_is_a_star]

you actually read the whole thing? i heart you

[arriflax]

I did. ^_- The prose was absolutely stunning. The opening stanza was especially captivating - "Tape Recorder Tongue" -- I like that. It's harsh and a bit jaded, but it describes the narrators will really well. I thought it was fantastic. Especially the build-up, using jeans as a guise for virginity - at least that's how it seemed to me.

Deep.