Brilliant idea for a fic, and executed beautifully :) I love how you dont feel the need to finish your fics with the ever-present cliche kiss on the lips and then the end.
I really love the way you paint the picture and you describe their mannerisms. I enjoy that so much :D My favourite line in the whole thing was:
"Chloe hesitates, her heart fluttering pleasantly when Beca finally allows their hands to link together properly."
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I'm shipping Beca/chloe and Beca/Jesse so I love fanfics from both :)
AMAZING.
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I really love the way you paint the picture and you describe their mannerisms. I enjoy that so much :D My favourite line in the whole thing was:
"Chloe hesitates, her heart fluttering pleasantly when Beca finally allows their hands to link together properly."
good job you.
(again!)
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