The Maid in the Castle [A Song of Ice and Fire ff, NC-17] 2/2

[novin_ha]

Title: The Maid in the Castle
Author: novin_ha
Fandom: A Song of Ice and Fire
Part 2/2. Overall ~13k words long. Part 1 can be found here.
Warnings: Dub-con, mindfuck, corruption kink, the pairing. Sansa is relatively 'of age' but only due to manipulating the timeline.

Comments

[girlupnorth]

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[le_mru]

No matter how hard I try this still isn't anything but disturbing. I know Sansa's supposed to be of age in this piece, but it still looks to much like Petyr is raising his child-bride to me. While I can certainly buy such development of events in light of ADWD, I am not able to get behind it; I don't want for Sansa to become Petyr's pawn, no matter what he has in store for her.

I'm also not so sure of the choice of words used to describe Sansa's vagina and labia - you seem to oscillate between 'scientific', modern terms, such as the mentioned 'labia', canon euphemisms ('lady parts', 'private parts') and the coloquial 'cunt' and 'pussy'.

[novin_ha]

I certainly don't aim not to be disturbing or to convince anyone to get 'behind' a pairing as unhealthy as this one ;) That I'd be disturbed by.

[etrangere]

Very interesting exploration of their relationship, the characterisation are brilliant and ring true for the most part; especially the way you get into Sansa's head. The writing is lovely. It strikes for a strange mix of disturbing and sexy very accurately. Can't say I found the epilogue working though - too abrupt; too neat.

[novin_ha]

Thank you very much for your comment! I'm glad about what you liked and will consider and think on what you didn'! :)

By the way, I've just recently seen your Shae fic recced on twitter (possibly due to womenlovefest!)