Pokemon Essay

[nrachae]

(Uh, my footnotes got nommed because on this computer I have to open it from notepad SOOO-)

LINKS, because this format sucks. I'll have to save this all on a PDF at a later date.

Essay | Works Cited | Figure 1

Pokémon Popularity: Appeal Tied to Self Insert Nature

A hobby that I have always held interest in is the huge franchise of Pokémon. While

Comments

[dreamsofpaprika]

Very well-written!

You present a very effective argument, the evidence is appropriate, the prose demonstrates consistent ability to control a wide range of elemnts of effective writing; the personal experience you provide in the intro is sophisticated, and supports your thesis.

Few criticims, though:

There are places where there is lapses in diction (''I first was introduced...'' should have been ''I was first introduced...''), but it's clear, so it's okay.

[nrachae]

Haha, thank you!

When I finished at 2am I didn't have time to smooth out all the kinks, as I didn't see them while I was sleepy and put it up here. :> Thank you for reading it!