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Dec 14, 2004 07:40

Title: Abandon, prequel to Forgo.
Author: Lonnie
Rating:R- to be on the safe side
Pairing: Marco/Jake
Fandom- Animorphs
Warnings-Un-beta-ed

Side Notes- This is for slipperieslope, who said that the last one needed a prequel. It really wasnt supposed to be this long.

Abandon )

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slipperieslope December 14 2004, 17:18:07 UTC
"Why not?" Jake's hadn't looked up from their locked hands this whole time, and Marco was starting to get worried. "Don’t you want to save me?"

I loved how everything turned on this passage, the tone just flipped and then slipped into focus. Thank you.

Ahem, sequel please ; )

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nubeinchild December 15 2004, 00:41:55 UTC
did that clear up some of the angst in Forgo for you?

Thats what i was trying to do in this one. Just get a backstory going.

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