This Is My Stop

Nov 16, 2008 11:25


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khazkhaz November 16 2008, 03:50:48 UTC
yay! hang out with me again!

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moyashi_kun November 16 2008, 16:05:46 UTC
Huh? Dai jo bu? What is happening with you, onee-san? First, your possessive pronouns are glitched. Second, where is the haystack? Third, did the camel break its back? Hehe.

Oh well, watch Cutie Honey The Live. I'm sure you will be more rejuvenated.

Chuku... chuku... shichau no!

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nucked_downward November 17 2008, 12:40:52 UTC
It distresses me that I can't identify the poorly used pronouns, though I did spot an 'is' where an 'are' should be.

It is easier for Scarlet Claw to enter the kingdom of Queen Beryl than for a camel to go through the eye of a needle. Camels have since stopped trying, so now they are only found in tens and are burned until only their butts remain. And did you know that two-humped camels exist? I thought cartoonists made up the second hump.

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nucked_downward November 17 2008, 12:53:23 UTC
Oh. Found it. Misheard it. Just like "Nothing's gonna change my love for you. You know naman my love how much I love you."

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moyashi_kun November 17 2008, 19:31:29 UTC
Tama naman yung IS a.

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hookyfynu October 31 2011, 23:28:01 UTC
Great writing! I want you to follow up to this topic!?!

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