I really really liked this beginning. I haven't been following the whole off screen Green Arrow spin-off thingy but I heard Chloe's been helping the League in some missions so I was really excited when I saw you incorporated that to your story. You've given us such a short chapter (sniffs) but it was very good so far. Chloe was very in character and the pace was adequate to what I think you're building up to and you've managed to translate visually the scenes very well as well as provide information and background on the dynamics between these characters without making your story stilted or going into tangents. Like I said up there I think you're up to a great start and I can't wait for what's coming next. I'm bookmarking your page as we speak *grin* please update soon!!
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ps: “Hola, mi bella Conchita...” was priceless =)
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