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nugacity August 15 2010, 11:10:10 UTC
Oh, this is the most lovely first comment I could hope for :) Thank you so much - and yes, I will have that sandwich. You must join me ^^

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quiet_elle August 13 2010, 23:54:30 UTC
that was beautiful :) and felt very realistic :)

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nugacity August 15 2010, 11:11:07 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! (I hate trying to get the right characterisations. Especially when you really, really love the characters)

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pisceanduality August 13 2010, 23:55:11 UTC
Yay, happy endings! This was superb! I really enjoyed reading it! <3

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nugacity August 15 2010, 11:11:25 UTC
Thanks :D

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gingey123 August 14 2010, 00:40:52 UTC
Flawless! I can so see it happening after the film.

“Darling,” He tells her, and he can tell she’s choosing not to hear what the silence meant just as much as he is, “if you were the woman of my dreams, you’d have much larger breasts.” He chokes for breath as she punches him the chest, and that’s the last they speak of it.

I loved this part, very Arthur :)

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nugacity August 15 2010, 11:12:18 UTC
Oh, Arthur, always the critic...
Thank you so much for commenting :D

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ryuugazaki August 14 2010, 01:01:59 UTC
Every little anecdote was pure perfection. I think you've described their relationship to the tee...a simple life that is ironically the most complicated in the world.

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nugacity August 15 2010, 11:13:12 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm all flustered by the praise. It's true, you get the impression though that if they weren't so dysfunctional, their relationship wouldn't...function?

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