The poem I'm submitting to Geodes...

[nugking420]

As the day slowly ends, the shadows of night begin to crawl onward

Comments

i like it

[anonymous]

I am just really understanding how intelligent u really r even though ur fucked up a lot

Re: i like it

[nugking420]

hah! I'll take that as a compliment...

[vacilando_sun]

Hey its Katona. Nice poem; it sounds a little towards the end kind of like a rap rhyme scheme- different from the unformed scheme in the beginning and the ABAB scheme in the middle. I don't know if you meant to do that or if it just ended up flowing like that, and whether or not you want to change it to one scheme throughout or keep it the way it is, that is up to you. Those things aside, good poem. I like it. add me.