for zqlin

[nugu_seyo]

Title: one step at a time
Recipient: zqlin
Group & Pairing: Jenissi/Xero (ToppDogg)
Rating: PG
Summary: Jiho writes the ending before he even starts the story.
Notes: dear recipient! first of all, your prompts were amazing, i really liked them. second, this is not the only fic i’m planning to give you! due to bad planning and starting way too

Comments

[zqlin]

I'M SCREAMING I'LL BE BACK

[zqlin]

okokokok, first, i read half of this in the morning and then i read the entire thing from the beginning now, but i already had a suspicion so i took a peek at the reveals and HA I KNEW IT WAS YOU HANNA LMAO

second, GOSH YOU CHOSE THE SOULMATES/COLOURS AU I'M SQUEE, but ofc the beginning was sad like :cc but at the same time, i was even more, yes dis sounds like hanna

"he tells them about how pretty her hair is - “It’s dark hazelnut brown, okay? Not black at all.”" this??? was so cute, idk how to explain it, but i read and it was like Q u Q

"“Yeah,” Jiho says, because that’s the right thing. " :c

"Perhaps, it’s the fact that he doesn’t know if her shirt is dark or light blue or blue at all, that makes him want to kiss her a second time. " i like this so much, but also generally how jiho's afraid of colours, you know with everyone else excited to find their soulmates, he's happy when he knows for sure he hasn't yet. it's also so sad, because he's actually searching for love, he doesn't want to find someone, but he doesn't want to

[heartclub]

crying you're the best, it was such a joy to write this for you, esp because ITS FOR YOU my one and only love

[shrdmdnssftw]

I've been the wooooorst at commenting on nuguseyo fics so far but I kind of maybe saved this to read on my phone when I had no wifi and so I couldn't really cry in the comments section at the time but like

I'm still sort of internally all AHHHHHH because this fic was so so so nice and I love this pairing so much and I think you represented them really well here and I just. I loved the whole colour/monochrome aspect, and the kind of slow burn nature of it all, and just it's so so lovely I don't even know I'm kinda just gushing but I wanted you to know I adore this!

[heartclub]

wow!!! thank you so much, this made me really happy <3