Joe Fic

[nuit2005]

TITLE: Bath
AUTHOR: Nuit
RATING: Adult
WARNINGS: Sex and sadness
CHARACTERS: Joe Byrne and the young Chinese woman who walked in on his bath
SUMMARY:thats about it
DISCLAIMER: Joe Byrne was a real person and I mean no disrespect to his memory or anyone connected to him.
A/N : Gem suggested this and I thought YEAH! and then it felt kind of sad and took a

Comments

[tabithas_cat]

Aww, sorry you're sad Nuit, I just read this at OL & I thought it was beautiful. XX

[nuit2005]

thanks TC- well you know...Joe is just like that huh? X

[gemelliragazza]

I love this Nuit, the way you got inside her head and his through her and how it gives us a whole new perspective and yet it's still unmistakeably him. I feel like I know her somehow... has just reminded me of something.

It would be easy to sit, let his body slip into my own, give him more and take for myself but I will not, instead I will store this memory in my head, the ecstasy of his beautiful face as his white heat spills into cool water, mixing and dispersing like the mist of the dawn

I love that bit.

I can see how it would have made you sad, I'm sorry. XXXXX

[nuit2005]

thanks honey, well good to get inside his head from a different place I think, means you can see other bits , so to speak..heeh have cheered up a bit now anyhow.

[unplugged32]

Writing this from Mei Lien's POV is a wonderful idea!! Beautifully written story, very sensual but also very sad. I can see why you found it hard to write.

{{hugs you close}}

[nuit2005]

*hugs back*, thanks I appreciate your comment XXX and all that and i didn't even say the C word, was actually having a laugh about that- i didn't think she would say cock, although is evidently a old word- and used to such effect in the film of course, but alternatives not so easy. I hate all that manhood member stuff as you know, and anyhow that didn't sound right either, i was giggling about spring rolls and perfectly rolled duck pancakes and her lotus flower. heeheh *pass the bucket*