[fic] Jaywalking [france/england] - i

[nuitdenovembre]

Title: Jaywalking.
Pairing: Francis/Arthur (France/England)
Rating/Warnings: NC-17. Snogging. Sex. Lots of both, really. Also boys being unnaturally stupid.
Word Count: 20,000 words OH GOD MY LIFE
'Verse: Human AU.
Summary: Arthur had always been rather alarmingly British, and so he made tea. Listened to Francis' thick voice announce Leonard Cohen and

Comments

[nachofrogger]

brilliant! catched me with the Leonard Cohen reference, and it's all great.

[falling_voices]

I &hearts me some Cohen, I really do. Thank you!

TOTALLY ORIGINAL COPY-PASTING COMMENT PART ONE

[pmpatg]

Imma gonna really try to keep my spazzing to a minimum.
Honest.

So, since I believe you already know how much I love your writing or shall I make a three-hour speech about it? let's try to keep it to just what I like about this fic. sounds good? well I'm doing it anyways

Francis enjoys sleeping. It is a remarkable invention, this thing sleep, and so he tucks his feet neatly under the slope of Arthur's thigh, tucks his face into the pillow with a whimper of affection.

there's always something about Francis sleeping which tickles me the right way. Like him being lazy or waking up early or whatever. I feel like it's right in a way, for him to enjoy it so much. And the tucking his feet thing is adorable and funny. Because he would do it. Always. Even if his feet weren't cold. just to feel 'em there.

In reality, Francis speaks very nearly perfect English,

ok this is maybe just my pet peeve talking. But man, French accents on English. Me no like. ok maybe on woman it's not that bad BUT MOVING ON and Francis is totally the type to

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[falling_voices]

Aha, okay, I love you. Still sizzling a bit from the sheer amount of this jesus, but hey here: responding to everything I can respond to without being utterly ridiculous, so just assume I'm underlining everything else in TARDIS!blue felt pen and drawing little blue hearts around them, m'kay? m'kay.

But man, French accents on English. Me no like

/snerk - me neither, though it's probably because being French, I cringe. That said, I probably have one too, so not much space for talking on my end, here.

buses are love

I love buses. Though I prefer them at night, because then I can see Paris in the dark and the lights; my darling city &hearts.

If Maddie is a girl does that mean Alfred or Arthur is blushing

OOPS oh damn, that's just my editing-fu failing. See, it was Matthew at first, and damnit I thought I'd changed everything so um, thanks for pointing it out? that said, YAY I'M GLAD YOU LIKE MADDIE. PEOPLE LIKE MADDIE. I LIKE MADDIE. THIS MAKES ME HAPPY.

I secretly love people holding themselves up while they make outOKAY SO WE

[pmpatg]

Aha, okay, I love you.

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[pmpatg]

OH GOD THE ENTIRE BATHTUB SCENE I WILL TRY BUT I WANNA SPAZZ REALLY BAD

It was a very small bathtub, it still is a very small bathtub, and even sitting opposite with their feet crisscrossing in the middle they couldn't avoid all the bumping, not really, not with Francis' toes curling and teasing between his legs.

small tubs FTW

"Very well," Francis laughed, five minutes later, the bathroom a carnage of water and drenched towels, and pushed his dripping hair out of his eyes with long fingers,

I know this one will sound weird but DRENCHED TOWELS NNNNNGGGGHHHHH
and pushing wet hair out of someone's face. Another secret love of mine

but Francis' chest was grounding behind Arthur's back in a strange reenactment of sex, except entirely different, and so that didn't matter, the slight awkwardnesses.another secret love of mine. Which is back against chest. It feels so right. Like, so so comfortable, no matter what. And it's like it's never supposed to be, always too small or too big or ribs poking out and chest too long and back too

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[falling_voices]

/CONTINUING, EXCUSE ME

and pushing wet hair out of someone's face. Another secret love of mine

Yessssssss. :D

I don't like sex in bathtubs. I like being togheter in bathtubs but never sex. When I read that sentence I went :D all over it

Victory! o/ yayness. No, but really I do like bathtub!sex, but platonic-sharing!bathtime just hits every kink I have ever, and makes me rather happier. Also, it's an important bit for the sake of the story. /le nod

oh an Arthur under pressure and being generally bitchy is so much fun ♥

Arthur is a dick. With everyone. Ever. It's even worse when he's had a long day and is still trying to figure out how to find his footing. (I may be reading a lil' bit too much into that, but who cares.)

Also - what are you talking about, these are good things, these are grandiose things you're saying, and they're making me so happy and warm and &hearts&hearts&hearts so spazz on.

Dat Summary ._.

[canadian_cat167]

When I read the summary, and you meantioned the Kinks AND Leonard Cohen, both of whom are on my Ipod's top listened to list, I knew I had to read this! I was not dissapointed! :D

Wow

[ext_3804032]

This is amazing. I love this so much. You are an extremely talented writer, and this is so touching and sweet and lovely. You gave me a whole new world of headcanons with your descriptions of small moments. I really look up to you! And that Milord reference, that`s one of my favourite songs, thank you so much.
Also, thanks for mentioning Axelle Red, I looked her up and she’s indeed amazing.