[fic] La Belle Dame Sans Merci

[nuitdenovembre]

Title: La Belle Dame Sans Merci
Warnings: Mentions of sex, but nothing too graphic, unless you have a vivid enough imagination.
Disclaimer: I don’t own either the cast or the in-between bouts of poetry, all of which were inspirations to writing this. Copyright goes, in order, to Aoyama Gosho, T. S. Eliot, Heinrich Heine, Leonard Cohen, John Keats,

Comments

[hatterjots]

sara-kins. Your insanely vague and incoherent writing style. I hate it. I hate it that I just can't make much sense of what you write because I feel that I am missing out on the full effect. Why can't I understand your writing?! ARGH. YOU.

Characterisation though: incredible. Better than anything I could ever write. Especially Akako. I can't ... oh god. *LOVES YOU* It's perfect. I love it how you can age the characters so realistically. Though you have just taken my writer's block and thrown it right on my head. Ow. OW. ILU SO MUCH. Beautiful.

... Goddamn you. Encore, encore.

[falling_voices]

What's that people telling me about this being incoherent? It's the most sensible piece I've written in months. Agh. >.>

... yeah? I didn't feel that way while writing, honestly-and your Saguru characterization made me rethink a lot of it overtime.

... ilu2. You make me so happy and so sad at the same time and how can I ever repay you for that?

[hattergems]

"I wonder. While I was writing synaesthesia, you said my writing style had
changed, and asked me if I was going to revert to my 'old' style when I was
done. I honestly didn't know, since it wasn't something I'd intended. Has it?
changed back?"

This style is ... I can hardly understand what is going on, it can't be compared. <3

[nuitdenovembre]

My style keeps changing ways all the damn time. It's worrying me a bit.

Oh yes, I have. Just not obviously, and nothing I'm particularly liking. And not in DCMK, either. This one, you're right, does deal with a lot of allusions, but they're mostly explicit, so...

What is happening? in the story, you mean?

Hmmm. I don't like my characters to remain static. People change, and therefore I think characters should change also. Only logical in my head, really... I love this Saguru you're creating, you know? he's rather fascinating.

*frowns* I don't follow you here. What's the connection between being a lesbian and duality?

[hatterjots]

*rereads* ... Okay. I lied. THIS IS JUST SO EPIC. ;o;

I swear I do not care if I don't have the brains to interpret this properly. Drinking this in is enough. Oh gods ... sara-kins, one of these days I really must find out what it is that makes you write like this.

[nuitdenovembre]

<33

There are some very nice mushrooms growing behind my apartment. That explains everything, really...