Comments | nullsys: fic : Shattered Faith

nullsys

fic : Shattered Faith

Apr 21, 2009 00:40

title
Shattered Faith

fandom
The OC

summary
Sandy doesn't believe Ryan

timeline
AU, shortly after "The Truth"

beta
If it counts, MS Word 03

a/n
Thanks to jassylou for her great support.

disclaimer
Sadly "The OC" isn't mine, but belongs to others (Josh Schwarz, FOX, ...)

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Comments 7

chrisear April 22 2009, 02:32:52 UTC

nice one, I love that story

but u used the word brother too often for my liking, seems like an overkill

nullsys April 22 2009, 02:38:15 UTC

Thanks.
(And I'll take a look at the 'brother'-thing as soon as I've time.)

chrisear April 22 2009, 02:40:18 UTC

nah dont worry... its just me...I dont like it too mushy... but most people love it

nullsys April 22 2009, 03:07:40 UTC

I've just finished re-reading it and you were right, it was a little overkill - now it's less 'brotherly'

steve_ski February 26 2011, 19:10:08 UTC

Hey, just ran across this story. Know its been a long...long time since you've abandoned it but any chance you'll get back to it. Interested to know how Ryan and Sandy fix things and how Caleb helps further with that.

nullsys February 26 2011, 20:29:04 UTC

Hi ( ... )

steve_ski February 27 2011, 03:33:26 UTC

Yeah, I understand the challenges of trying to find the words to fill in the ideas. Find myself day dreaming in meetings or other places I shouldn't be and then can't remember the details when I try and put them to paper. Just have to keep trying (easier said then done...)

As to english, I can tell its not your primary language but you do a very good job of translating into it.

I went through your tags and liked all the stories.