fic : Better Days

May 22, 2008 01:01



title 
Better Days

fandom 
The OC

summary 
A presumed dead Ryan returns home after a few months

timeline 
AU (season 1)

beta 
If it counts, MS Word 03

disclaimer 
Sadly "The OC" isn't mine, but belongs to others (Josh Schwarz, FOX, ...)

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chrisear May 22 2008, 05:18:18 UTC
mean mean mean... u had me thinking that the Cohens were home. and to put it into Ryans words "just Rosa"

will wait patiently (or not) for the Cohens to find out.

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fredsmith518 May 22 2008, 07:03:31 UTC
very nicely written

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jassylou May 23 2008, 22:30:35 UTC
I'm loving it. Rosa always had a soft spot for Ryan. I thought she would have been really shocked to see Ryan. She may get delayed shock later.*wink*
I wonder if she'll tell Ryan to hide out in the pool house or maybe he'll be watching TV or playing a video game when the Cohens arrive home.

I can't wait for the Cohens to arrive home and I'm definitely sure that we'll have someone collapsing with shock sooner or later.
I hope Ryans ready for the whole lot of loving that he's sure to get. The Cohens especially Kirsten will be in full on"Mother Hen " mode. I don't think they'll be waiting long for Seth to come home from Lukes. Seth will probably grow a set of wings just for that purpose. I'm soooo excited for every one!!!.Yay!!!!

I'll be happier still when he grows his hair back to normal.

Oh this is so freakin great,it's amazing!!!!!
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I was wondering about "Prodigal" for a title but someone may have already used it. It's just a thought.hugs

Thanks for writing Andrew.:D
Update very soon please?. :) mwah

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nullsys May 23 2008, 22:42:55 UTC
Ryan in the pool house might happen, but I don't think in any way how you are imagining it.

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jassylou May 23 2008, 23:24:39 UTC
Maybe Rosa knows that Kirsten has misplaced something. She could tell Kirsten it's in the pool house that she has just been cleaning. She could tell Kirsten it looks slightly different and Kirsten/Sandy and Rosa could go and look for it.

Ryan is probably on the bed and might have dozed off. I know the shock might be too much for them but all the same it would be precious. Kirsten in "Mother Hen" mode again. Sandy straight into the Lawyer mode,doing what he does best and heads will roll at the hospital for not letting them know it was Ryan that had been in a coma. I know you seem to want a serious but fluffyish story but at the same time I know you could have a bit of fun with it.

You are very capable of doing it and I'm enjoying your work tremendously!. hug

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nullsys May 23 2008, 23:27:22 UTC
This fic is the fluffy one, the other one, where Ryan lets the doc know who he is will be the angsty one. But don't ask me when.

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