fic : Better Days

[nullsys]

title 
Better Days

fandom 
The OC

summary 
A presumed dead Ryan returns home after a few months

timeline 
AU (season 1)

beta 
If it counts, MS Word 03

disclaimer 
Sadly "The OC" isn't mine, but belongs to others (Josh Schwarz, FOX, ...)

previous 
0 : The Worst Day |
1 : Realization |
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Comments

[chrisear]

Lol, nice update......

Kirsten must think her mind is playing real big tricks.... that she doesnt even go out and check who that stranger is who is using her poolhouse

[fredsmith518]

oh, that was unexpected, which is excellent, always good to surprise the reader, looking forward to reading the actual meeting
the 'dream' was a sweet prologue to this
(I think your writing is getting stronger and stronger - I hope you don't mind me saying that:))

[nullsys]

Thanks, and of course I don't mind - I appreciate any honest feedback, especially if it's positive.

[jassylou]

Sorry I commented on Experiment 4 before I saw you had posted this. All I can say is ITA with fred and this is all gelling together wonderfully.

It's no good to ask for another quick update as you've already got Exp 4 posted. hugs *pats nullsys*:)