fic : Better Days

Jun 22, 2008 18:12



title 
Better Days

fandom 
The OC

summary 
A presumed dead Ryan returns home after a few months

timeline 
AU (season 1)

beta 
If it counts, MS Word 03

disclaimer 
Sadly "The OC" isn't mine, but belongs to others (Josh Schwarz, FOX, ...)

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jassylou June 22 2008, 21:12:02 UTC
This is lovely Andrew but Sandy wants a foot up his ass for being so slow witted. Surely if he'd looked and listened harder/.closer everything would have gelled into place

Especially these words (“I need to get out of here … sorry mom, Rosa; I’ll be at Luke’s)would have explained it all. It must be devastatingly hard for Sandy to take in because he loved him soooo much.

I hope Sandy runs after Ryan and gets him back and I think that Kirsten/Rosa need to step in and explain. Also Kirsten should be helping to get Rys hair back to normal.
I hope Ryan can get the family together and that we get a swift happy solution, (here I am with happy again. I need happy in RL as well as fiction)even though it may be cryptic to one of them .(namely Seth).

I'm proud and pleased for you yet again Andrew. Update soon please....Right?. mwah

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nullsys June 22 2008, 21:43:04 UTC
Thanks and don't worry Ryan's only giving Sandy some time to cool off and come to terms with these wonderful but shocking news.
I've really tried to stay on the happy path, but this kinda wrote itself the way it is now.

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jassylou June 22 2008, 21:53:46 UTC
You my young man are wonderful! You light up my life.

Can I adopt you and be "mommy Jassylou" to nullsys the famous author LOL hugs .

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nullsys June 22 2008, 22:06:29 UTC
I don't think that my mom would agree to that, but you'd make me happy if you'll stay my sort of alpha/beta reader.

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jassylou June 22 2008, 22:22:09 UTC
High five on that Andrew!*nods* alpha/beta/reader).

If you get too much for your Mom,she might like to share!!!!?.(g)

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jonsmom14 June 23 2008, 21:52:16 UTC
Aww!! Poor Ryan! He's already so insecure and Sandy pulls this? Ok, now I'm on the edge of my seat, which will get really uncomfortable if I have to stay here very long - hint, hint! ;) This is really fun to read. I can't wait for the next part!

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nullsys June 23 2008, 22:07:26 UTC
Thanks.
I'll give my best, but RL doesn't let me much time to write at the moment. Also I've still no idea what will happen next - so I'm just as curious as you about that. :)

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