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jelsemium in numb3rswriteoff

Anomaly (Team Schmoop)

Oct 28, 2010 23:32

Title: Anomalous
Author: Jelsemium
Pairing/Characters: Charlie Eppes/Liz Warner-Eppes
Rating/Category: PG/ Het
Word count: 900
Spoilers: (if applicable) None
Summary: Liz is feeling … different
Notes/Warnings: No eating, drinking or smoking. Please keep your hands inside the story while it is moving ( Read more... )

round 024, fic: schmoop

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jelsemium October 29 2010, 18:36:52 UTC

Thanks for the kind words, and for reminding me to put the poll link in. (Sigh, my memory is a memory...)

mustangcandi October 29 2010, 12:49:58 UTC

BWAHAHA.

(A) Charlie/Liz is one of my favorite rare pairings. I don't know why... they just are.

(B) Nice misdirect indeed. :)

jelsemium October 29 2010, 18:37:44 UTC

Thanks! I think they would make a cute couple. (And I note that the Eppes brothers seem to be drawn to Asians.)

mustangcandi October 29 2010, 18:56:01 UTC

I think Charlie and Liz are ADORABLE together... especially because she started really understanding his math in the later seasons. :)

PLUS, my life long fandom goal is for someone to write the fic where Liz gets to say "That's not how your brother does it..."

I mean, come on! LOL.

jelsemium October 29 2010, 22:35:57 UTC

Poor Charlie, coming in second to Don. That would have to be painful.

I wonder if that crush the Eppes had on Val Eng influenced their later choices? I keep mistaking the actress who played Val Eng for the one who played Robin Brooks, and it amuses me that Don's marrying a woman who looks so much like his high school sweetheart.

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lilacs_roses October 29 2010, 16:19:43 UTC

ROFL!! LOL, very nicely done LOL. Great misdirection and the interplay between the two was wonderful :)

jelsemium October 29 2010, 18:38:22 UTC

Thanks! I worried that an ulcer isn't exactly "schmoopy," but I couldn't resist is as a punch line.

rodlox October 29 2010, 20:07:09 UTC

>but I couldn't resist it as a punch line.
its how they handle it, that determines if its shmoopy.

rodlox October 29 2010, 20:05:33 UTC

and it probably looks just like Charlie. :)

>hot chocolate AND French vanilla
flavor, Charlie, that's how.

this is a very enjoyable tale of their married life. brava!!

jelsemium October 29 2010, 22:37:58 UTC

Thanks! Love the idea of the ulcer looking like Charlie. Bet Don would make that kind of comment.

I got the start of this story when I was drinking Land O' Lakes French Vanilla Hot Cocoa and thought that "vanilla chocolate" had to be an anomaly. (And it's soooooo good.)

rambler75 October 29 2010, 20:10:23 UTC

ROFL totally did not see that one coming :D very good

jelsemium October 29 2010, 22:38:14 UTC

Thanks for the kind words!