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Fic: Taken for Granted

Nov 01, 2009 13:03

Title: Taken For Granted
Author: numbartist
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A shaky breath escapes him, the guilt submerging once again as her arms wrap their way around him, and he is unable to escape from these lies.
Characters: Chase/Cameron
Set: After Brave Heart 6.06.
Word Count: 516
A/N: Not beta'd, sorry for any grammatical mistakes!

( Her scent alone clears the fading ache in his temples and the even pattern of her breathing temporarily soothes the throbbing guilt. )

fanfiction:house md, ship:chameron, character:robert chase, character:allison cameron, show:house md

Comments 12

mrsjoshualyman November 1 2009, 18:27:46 UTC

Oh, that breaks my heart. Really beautiful though. I think you really got into Chase's head.

numbartist November 1 2009, 19:24:05 UTC

Wow, thank you! <3

quigely November 2 2009, 02:12:17 UTC

This was fantastic! So well written!

numbartist November 3 2009, 02:54:26 UTC

Thank you! C:

peachylinz1 November 2 2009, 02:33:12 UTC

Poor Chase, he breaks my heart! Beautiful writing, you could really feel the pain he was experiencing...and I love how you likened the couch to a place that holds all his lies

numbartist November 3 2009, 03:37:02 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! <3

danakm November 2 2009, 07:05:55 UTC

heartbreaking :(

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

numbartist November 3 2009, 03:39:46 UTC

I know, the last scene killed me so it is only fitting that this be equally/more sad. Hate it but love it at the same time.

♥

rassafraggin November 2 2009, 12:52:39 UTC

Short and sweet, very believable! Well-written poignant descriptions of mood and visuals brought this brief scene to life. Cheers.

numbartist November 3 2009, 03:40:26 UTC

Wow, thank you very much! C:

rassafraggin November 3 2009, 06:15:20 UTC

Not a problem but egads, your Chase glowy icon is prettier than my Chase glowy icon! >:D

numbartist November 4 2009, 02:04:15 UTC

LOL But I love your glowy icon! I'm an artsy person so I especially love digital arts of Chase or Cam. <3