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(eunhyuk/donghae) checklists

Oct 13, 2010 21:19

Title: Checklists
Pairing: Eunhyuk/Donghae
Rating: PG
Genre: AU, angst
Summary: It's not the end if it's not okay.

( gotta live like we're dying )

p:eunhyuk/donghae, super junior, #fic

Comments 9

xapplekiss October 13 2010, 13:36:20 UTC

so sweet and guuh~ <3

abrra_kadabrra October 13 2010, 13:58:20 UTC

so... bittersweet...
(why do I even read angst again? I'm such a masochist ^^)
you're really good ^^

catskilt October 13 2010, 14:01:45 UTC

This is so sad and....suffocating, somehow. And yet gorgeously written and just...hmm.

I like how you interspersed the present with the past, it brings across their grief so much more heavily and all the things that could have been but aren't and basically the sadness and sweetness of everything.

It is rare to find such well-written EunHae, so thank you! :D

myeolchihearts October 13 2010, 16:24:31 UTC

~close to tears right now. T__T

shin_ah_mi October 13 2010, 16:37:52 UTC

beautiful...
catskilt said suffocating!!! and i can't chose better word!!!