Comments | nvgvup: When Life Gives You Algae-Lemons

nvgvup

When Life Gives You Algae-Lemons

Feb 20, 2012 17:17

Rating: K
Pairing: Adama/Roslin, Liz Lemon, various BSG (BSG/30 Rock Crossover)
Word Count: 329 (Haiku format)
Author’s Note: Written for the adama_roslin Secret Valentine exchange. My Valentine was whatever_lj and this is my attempt to meet all elements of the request: a remix, a poem, and if you squint, some definite longing! This is my first attempt at remixing, writing ( Read more... )

poem, fanfic, a/u, remix, bsg

Comments 11

afrakaday February 21 2012, 02:54:18 UTC

Oh, this is delightful! How ridiculously fun! I am so impressed by your poetic prowess. :) I hadn't read the original but I think your haikuized take on it is awesome. Hooray for haiku and for you!

nvgvup February 21 2012, 03:07:15 UTC

Hooray for haiku and for you!
The poetry bug is catching I see!

I'm glad you liked, I loved the original story when I first read it, and had a lot of fun exploring a bit more of the idea!

ladyofavalon77 February 21 2012, 03:40:59 UTC

Unique format and great crossover :)

nvgvup February 21 2012, 06:12:13 UTC

Thanks! All the credit goes to whatever for starting this little crossover. I'm a big fan of 30 Rock but never would have tried this on my own!

marzipanilla February 21 2012, 03:45:12 UTC

I haven't seen that particular 30 Rock crossover before, so, two in one! Woohoo!

Cute.

Gorgeous but insane
Sort of describes Liz and Laura.

nvgvup February 21 2012, 06:12:58 UTC

They are both gorgeous and insane aren't they?! Probably why I like 'em both so much!

whatever_lj February 21 2012, 05:42:00 UTC

OHMYGODS!!!

You realize that you didn't need to fulfill ALL my wishes??? One would have been wonderful.

BUT THIS?!!

I've never seen anything like it -- a remix/poem/fanfic - oh my!

You've created a new life form, friend!

I loved all of this, but especially: Drowning in grey sweats/Glowing from feet to scarved head . So lovely.

This was simply fabulous. I thank you and thank you again...

nvgvup February 21 2012, 06:16:36 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you like it!
I've never done a remix and really wanted to give it a shot but then was so incredibly terrified of butchering your beautiful stories! And THEN I couldn't decide which one because I loved them all! Then this one just sort of happened, which is what usually happens when I write. I can't make myself sit down and write. It either wakes me up at night and comes pouring out or it stays locked away in my brain somewhere!

And meeting all your wishes...that was just luck!!
Thank you for letting me play in your world for a little while :)

akachankami February 22 2012, 05:47:01 UTC

that was amazing! O.O i'm impressed! a whole remix in haiku! kudos! =D