Making it Work

[nvgvup]

Title: Making it Work
Rating:
T
Fandom/Pairing: Stargate SG-1; Carter/O’Neill
Word Count: 1,209
Author’s Note: My first SG1 and Cater/O’Neill fic! Yay for branching out! *realizing I need some stargate icons*
Set early season 9: possible spoilers for Beachhead.
Disclaimer: Stargate SG-1 and all the characters herein belong to MGM and their fabulous

Comments

[sjhw_tolerance]

Glad you took a chance and made a change! Very nice.

[nvgvup]

Thank you :)
Writing for SG1 scares me a bit, with all the scifi techno stuff, but I can at least do little moments like this, I hope!

[sharp2799]

Holy freaking Batman! Hope you keep writing this pair!

[nvgvup]

LOL Love that response :)
I will endeavor to earn it more often!

[jemster]

Wait, this is your first SG-1 story? Just one question: what took you so freakin long? ;-)

[nvgvup]

Aw shucks :) Thank you.
To be honest, what took me so long is I was trying to rewatch the entire show so I could write without screwing up the canon timeline & details! TEN SEASONS!!!! I'm halfway through season 9 but this little story just didn't want to wait.

[jemster]

The S/J storyline takes a major backseat in seasons 9 and 10 so no worries. Also, this story fits perfectly in the beginning of season 9 so it works.

I wish more new writers in a show took the time to get things right like you have. *sigh*

[nvgvup]

I really try to write in-character, that's part of the challenge of fanfiction for me. Otherwise, I'd just write original fiction! Even if you're gonna do an a/u, it's still best to stay within what the actual show gave us. imo

Glad this worked and hopefully I'll do some more soon!

[outuendo_11]

I don't know this show, but I'm a good friend, so I shall comment. This seems eerily reminiscent of life.

I am impressed by your disregard of not writing anything too...pornish. This is new! I liked it. I always love conversations in bed. I always wondered - in a weird way, because I'm weird - what couples talked about while curled up in bed, or midcoitus or postcoitus or precoitus. i just felt like using the word coitus a lot. Suffice it to say, I like conversations in bed. And that was this story.

Yes, since I have no idea what this show is about, I shall offer that comment. :) See, I'm so nice. Maybe one of these days you can tie me to a - hopefully comfortable - chair and force me to watch this show. Then maybe I would have a better appreciation slash understanding of the nuances of this story.

[nvgvup]

You ARE a good friend :D

This seems eerily reminiscent of life.
Do I even dare ask? That's a convo for another place maybe? :/

I am impressed by your disregard of not writing anything too...pornish.
Did I succeed? It's not too much is it? I rated it Teen, I hope that was a safe rating.

Maybe one of these days you can tie me to a - hopefully comfortable - chair and force me to watch this show.
See reply to comment above...TEN SEASONS!!!! It has better be a comfy chair if I force you to watch this one. And yes, the nuances. It is a complicated relationship herein.

I refuse to comment on your coitusesses!

[outuendo_11]

Oh my gosh, it was WAY too much like a porno. I think you should have rated it like...I don't even know what the highest rating is, but it should have been at least like... X-rated. Probably. For the precoitus. (I worked in another coitus, just for you)

Dork, it was fine! It was sexy, but not like IN YOUR FACE sex. ;)

[nvgvup]

:p

I stick my tongue at you. The end.