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ndnickerson June 21 2012, 14:06:06 UTC
Rachel/Tim, swimming pool

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FILLED (R) lymricks June 27 2012, 14:11:30 UTC
Trigger Warnings: Racism, Implied past attempted sexual assault
AN: I used a lake and not a pool--hope that's ok!

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She kisses like she does everything: deliberately and with intent. She kisses like she does nothing at all, with a sense of abandon. After the first time, Tim wakes up in the morning and watches through half lidded eyes as she does up her bra. He’s still in bed and she’s standing by the door, sunlight through a crack in the blinds making her skin glow in a way he thinks only Kentucky sunlight can do (if he cared enough about Kentucky to think about things like that, anyway, which he just might, at this moment-with her).

She looks up and sees him watching, smiles. “I have to go pick my nephew up.”

“I’ll drive,” Tim says before he really thinks about it. Maybe she’d meant that to be a goodbye, a see you later, a this was a one time thing. He pushes the blankets off him anyway and climbs out of her bed. He stretches ( ... )

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Re: FILLED (R) lymricks June 27 2012, 14:12:31 UTC
Tim gets a week of light duty, which Art says is what happens when some Harlan jackass locks you in a room and “asks” you questions for twenty-four hours. When Tim reminds him that the guy had nothing to do with Harlan, Art tips his head to the side and glances at Raylan, “Huh,” Art says with half a shrug, his eyes sliding back to Tim, “Well that’s new. Good for you, soldier. Gettin’ a little variety in ( ... )

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Re: FILLED (R) lymricks June 27 2012, 14:12:56 UTC
Skinny dipping isn’t new to Tim, exactly. He’s done it before, he’ll probably do it again, but with Rachel, it’s completely different. It’s reverent at first, and then a little bit like being a teenager again. She splashes at him sporadically, sometimes catching him, sometimes not. Her horrible aim disproves his night-vision theory ( ... )

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Re: FILLED (R) ndnickerson June 28 2012, 00:05:15 UTC
Oh, man, this was glorious. I loved it. I loved the descriptions of Rachel and how Tim sees her, and your phrasing and imagery is just gorgeous. Totally wonderful and perfect. Thank you so much for writing my prompt! :D

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kalisgirl March 30 2013, 06:06:27 UTC
Wow, this is gorgeous! The connection between them is set out so strongly through your imagery and the snapshots of life here. Both of the are beautifully in character, and their broken pasts are so well drawn. I just love the concept of these cynical, action-oriented people letting go together and floating still among the stars... so lovely, all of this.

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