Dokan ~ PT 1

Jul 30, 2010 16:50

Title added. You'll see why later :3.

Warning: It sucks. )

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candypikachu July 30 2010, 21:07:05 UTC
KEKEKEKE SUCH A SEME. *u* <333 i have such an obsession with this couple omo @___@
LOL poor Nao-kun finding out that Shuya's mother>him~ ;w;

OH BUT THE TITLE WAS THE BEST PART, DON'T YOU AGREE. >D

but this isn't bad ('CEPT FOR YOUR FAIL GRAMMAR IN SOME PARTS); i liked it :3

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nyancafe July 30 2010, 21:07:44 UTC
SHIPPIN THIS COUPLE FO LIFEEE<3.

LOL WOO.

DON'T MAKE FUN OF MA FAIL GRAMMAR ;O;

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candypikachu July 30 2010, 21:09:58 UTC
LOL IKRRR THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN MIZUHOxSHUYA /RAGEFACEON

8DDDD YOU SHOULD TOTALLY SPOIL THE WHOLE THING BY ADDING,

"I love you, Nao-kun~," Shuya whispered.

"Na~nte ne." |DDD HAHAH

YOU SHOULD GIVE ME CREDIT FOR CORRECTING IT. ;D /SHOT

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nyancafe July 30 2010, 21:10:55 UTC
WH-

GDI DID YOU LIKE JOCK MY IDEA OUT OF MY OWN HEAD?

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neebsawk July 30 2010, 21:17:06 UTC
lol the title.
last sentence A+

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nyancafe July 30 2010, 21:19:29 UTC
best title i ever thought of.

aww yeah >DDD.

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neebsawk July 30 2010, 21:32:49 UTC
ahhah
buh srsly i need to actually get round to watching the film nao
so that this fic makes more sense D:

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nyancafe July 30 2010, 21:39:46 UTC
lolll well hopefully the DVD will come out soon D:

or just go to japan and watch it.

or UK in February LOL.

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