So Won't You Close Your Eyes And Leave Me B r e a t h l e s s ?

[nyc_poet]

I was on a poem rampage and I will post them all in a series of days. I'm extremely proud of them. Usually, I don't push my poems onto people. But, like, I'm REALLY impressed with my writing right now and I have I think 6 or 7 poems that I have showed to EVERYONE that comes my way. Here's one of them

Comments

[ayoub]

Very good :D

[nyc_poet]

thanksssss :D ♥ ~Sam~

[sarcar]

this is really mature and good.

[nyc_poet]

thanks so much...isn't it great when you get a poem you are so proud of and everyone else actually is proud of you too for it? i love that feeling! :D ♥ ~Sam~

[waterudoin]

Awesome!
Your writing really has matured. I mean, it was mature before for your young age but now it is even better!
Keep up the good writing and keep being proud of what you create.

-Christopher

[nyc_poet]

thankssss yeah my style is always subject to change...but change is good :) ♥ ~Blue~

[autumnsea]

Such beauty in this piece.

It feels as though it is written straight from the heart. You should feel proud of your work. If only I could of written half as well at your age, Sam.

♥

[nyc_poet]

thanks, Autumn...i've always been a writer ever since i could hold a pencil (of course, back then, it was crap haha) but i only became good writer after my Daddy died practically three years ago...so really, i might not have found my talent until later on in life if something so tragic hadn't happened (this poem does come straight from the heart since i hate the snow, viewing it as my Daddy's life taker, although that's not true, but i want something to take the blame)...always gotta find the positives in the negatives or else life is going to suck :D ♥ ~Sam~