A Poem

Feb 25, 2006 16:13

Hey. I wrote this poem after I snapped into a million pieces Thursday. It's pretty raw and different than my usual style but I think I actually kindof like it...what do you think? Anything I should do to tighten it up ( Read more... )

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ayoub February 25 2006, 22:51:52 UTC
Beautifully written, Sam...

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nyc_poet February 25 2006, 22:55:17 UTC
thankssss :D i kindof like it in its rawness ♥ ~Sam~

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autumnsea February 26 2006, 03:49:18 UTC
I really think it's fine as it is Sam. Very well written sweets. ♥

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nyc_poet February 26 2006, 12:36:17 UTC
thank you :) ♥ ~Sam~

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waterudoin February 27 2006, 07:23:45 UTC
I love it!
I love that you are exploring your feelings about yourself. It's great therapy too. I love your poems about love, your wanting for another and all of that. But I love and respect your poems that are introspective, that show you exploring yourself.

This one is raw and awesome.
Keep up the great work!

-Christopher

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nyc_poet February 27 2006, 11:34:03 UTC
thank you...it is great therapy :D ♥ ~Sam~

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