Haven't written a poem about him in a while...

Mar 02, 2006 19:52


It feels so good to be liberated of you

I can walk down the hallways
See your shining brown eyes
Admire your confident smile
And not feel the redness seep into my cheeks when you forget to say "hey" to me

I can see pictures
You and her
Kissing, smiling, happy
And not be weighted down by grief over you

I can think about other boys
Smile because of other boys
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autumnsea March 3 2006, 01:19:51 UTC
This is really great Sam. I very much like it. Honesty in emotions is a beautiful thing to read.

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nyc_poet March 3 2006, 02:13:38 UTC
thank you...i actually really like this one too...what can i say? i believe my best poems are about Jase because I've really cared for him so it feels good to feel familiar emotions and fall into familiar styles and topics of writing...♥ ~Sam~

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ayoub March 3 2006, 08:52:02 UTC
This is beautiful, Sam :)

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nyc_poet March 3 2006, 11:35:29 UTC
thank you...i really like this one :D ♥ ~Sam~

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shadowshape March 3 2006, 09:02:39 UTC
voice is so powerful;
I know that voice can always sweep me away
love and blessed be
xxx

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nyc_poet March 3 2006, 11:36:33 UTC
thank you *blushes* :D love and blessed be to you too (sorry for the spelling error in the first comment :P) ♥ ~Sam~

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bway_girl75 March 3 2006, 19:40:40 UTC
aww i like it...its very good =)))

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nyc_poet March 3 2006, 19:54:52 UTC
thanksssssss ♥ ~Sam~

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