Comments | nycsunshine: All You Had to Do Was Ask

nycsunshine

All You Had to Do Was Ask

Dec 30, 2004 07:29

Written for teffy's C&C Snuggly Fic Challenge. Quite a luffly little piece of Lost fanfic if I do say so myself.

Written for mariadeluca who asked for Hurley, cute awkwardness, post baby-birth, and very little Jack. No Shannon. No Shannon at all. She's icky ( Read more... )

Comments 3

girlfrom10thave January 1 2005, 03:19:31 UTC

*huggles nycsunshine madly*
I love it! I love it! I love it! It's wonderful fluffiness is just what I needed after two days of feeling sick. You captured the Charlie/Claire relationship perfectly.

bailunrui January 1 2005, 06:45:39 UTC

So cute! I really liked Hurley's Jedi moment, hee! *sigh* I love fics with happy endings.

shadowscribez January 3 2005, 01:01:12 UTC

Oh I liked that! It was sweet. You captured Charlie, Claire and Hurley very well. The narration really helps... you know how fantastic it would be to actually have a little voice-over for what's going on inside like Jack's head or Kate's when they're just walking around alone doing something?

Very good dialogue, too. I've always liked your dialogue. It's smart, snappy and in-step with the character. ;)