Crits/redline.

[nyliir]

I've been drawing up a profile of Nyliir. Since I've been working on her design a little lately.
I'd really like some harsh (but constructive!) crits or redlines. C:

Comments

[foxchibi]

Alrightyyyyyy lemme see if I can be constructive.
First off, her design is looking fabulous, you get better and better each time you draw her. c':
I notice she seems to be leaning forward somewhat. Is her tail going to have a lot of adorments or will it be longer to balance this out? Otherwise you should more her shoulder down so it's not quite so high up on chest so her front legs aren't angled quite so far back.
Also, her neck should be a little thicker up near the base of her skull, so it looks like it connects more smoothly. You see what I mean?
Other than that it's coming great hun <'3 I'm sure someone will probably contradict me, but whatever.

[foxchibi]

move* sorry about any other typos hun!

[nyliir]

C': Thanks so much. <333

The end of her tail is spikey, but probably not enough to balance her out. I'll move her shoulders down. c:
And I always seem to draw my necks too thin! Haha.

Thanks again. <3333333333