Nymboline, that was truly a beautiful poem. You really should look into being a writer. You made me feel every emotion you wrote about in your poem. Is this something you're currently going through? Well, i also wanted to thank you for the response you sent me about my journal entry when i was feeling really down during Thanksgiving. This is the first time i'm logging in since November, so i hadn't seen it before then. I still have moments when i just want to end it. The pain never really goes away, it seems. I hate to say it, but my ex-boyfriend is a big part of the reason why i feel so insecure. Its crazy, cause we've been broken up for over a year, but i still think about our relationship and then i get really sad, because it was so unhealthy and i still can't believe i put up with some of the things he did to me. Well, i don't want to bore you with my drama, but i just wanted to let you know what a beautiful poem that was. Have a blessed day.
was following links and found your poem. very touching, shows inner beauty. intense thoughts. I works 4 days and am just serfing. now... be safe.
..... Candles are a gift of light, A tiny sun, a bit of star. No other dancer in the night Dances with such sheer delight, Little souls serene and bright, Each a glimpse of what we are Shining innocent and pure. ---By Teilman Susato
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very touching, shows inner beauty.
intense thoughts.
I works 4 days and am just serfing. now...
be safe.
.....
Candles are a gift of light,
A tiny sun, a bit of star.
No other dancer in the night
Dances with such sheer delight,
Little souls serene and bright,
Each a glimpse of what we are
Shining innocent and pure.
---By Teilman Susato
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