[hitman reborn]: dino/hibari: parenthetical

[nymous_fic]

Sleep, why do you elude me so? I’m sorry for neglecting you, but please come back.

Title: Parenthetical (as in, A Lot of Random Stuff Happens)
Rating: PG-13?
Pairing: Dino/Hibari
Warnings: Not-quite-smut! Angst out of nowhere! Disconnectedness! Fail! Also, death? Yeah, we all know who it is.
Summary: I realize that nothing I write has a plot, and I

Comments

[ex_hayato987]

It appears my hero has made another post :V
Ah, I really love the writing you've got down. How the fic is very loose and care-free, up until a certain scene- then the whole thing feels tense and unrelaxed. There's a definite change there, and I love it. And the pairing you write for, it really-yes just yes.
Ahshit, I need a D18 icon.

[nymous_fic]

Hero, eh? *strikes a pose* :DDD

Thank you so much! I didn't-- I wasn't sure what I was doing; the fic just sort of took off on its own, and-- well, I'm really, really glad it worked for you! Thank you <333

Ahaha, I need an icon, period. >_>

[stigmatize]

OH MY DEAR SWEET ANONYMOUS. god stop writing so well you make me feel PITIFUL. your hibari is so perfectly violent, trying to smother dino in his sleep and dino being so careful and IT'S ALL VERY ENDEARING, IN A WAY. and this was written so perfectly and stop writing so perfectly, it makes me abuse italics and fall all over myself when I see you've posted something new in the morning when my grammar is still HORRIBLE.

... also that sounds like something I would do. "HOW OLD IS THIS BAGEL? WE NEED TO LEEEAVE. AND THE VERMIN OF THE WORLD INHABIT IIIIIT."

ALSO TWO WORDS: firebird and lullaby?

[nymous_fic]

MY DEAR SWEET ARSONS, I AM ANON NO MORE. <3

And, no no no no! Don't feel pitiful, fic is supposed to promote feelings of GOODNESS and-- JOY and possibly ENDEARMENT TO THE AUTHOR??? :D

But, I, uh-- if you insist, I will... stop writing so perfectly, which won't be hard, because I don't. Write perfectly, that is. <3333 And I'm sorry for posting in the morning, even though your grammar is impeccable.

Well, clearly you are awesome, because that same guy went around giving everyone candy canes while singing God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen. :D

Firebird and lullaby, duly noted! Thank you so much!

[demoerin]

What I love is that this fic is a lot like Dino himself - silly playful happy joyjoy and then the SERIOUS BUSINESS. The switch is artful.

Random words: pin & keelhaul.

[nymous_fic]

Haha! He is very much like that indeed! <3

Thank you so very much~

Pin and keelhaul-- keelhaul! That's interesting. Thank you!!

[rukawagf]

took me forever to read it. only coz i'm sneaking in during work breaks cough.

errrr only thing i'd like to say is that in the beginning, i wish you said it was TYL arc, coz it confused me a bit ahahahaha

otherwise... hol shit... i love this fic. i'll re-read it later in leisure. i just... couldn't help myself... and had to read it............

[nymous_fic]

I, uh-- sorry. I'm sorry! M-maybe your boss would like to be introduced to KHR?

Ah, yes yes, that is a good point. I'm just so ALKNASLGA??!? all the time that I just throw stuff out there without really thinking, so that completely slipped my mind...

<333 Thank you, as always~

[barnacletree]

ARRGGG. You two need to stop posting during finals. I'm SERIOUS - as in: do it anyway, I wasn't really accomplishing anything. ;_;

♥ NO REGRETS and aljsdlkjsd'sfkjladjflksa there's a CONDENSED LIST and Hibari makes the understatement of the century (“You’re not - not so bad to look at it. I suppose.”) and I loved all the off-beat syntactically-simple remarks and hey, at least this is keeping me awake, and HERE, let me quote your more stuff back to you, because that's not obnoxious at all:

Hibari can pull away if he wants to, like right now, when he wants to. -- my favorite line in the whole thing. <3333

When he returns, irritated, to cleanse Namimori of Gamma’s repulsive taint, he finds Yamamoto and Gokudera are ten years younger, innocent yet of their ultimate sin, and Tsuna and Reborn just won’t stay buried. -- this makes me sad. I am a sap. T_T

Off to fail finals now. Yay. -- I'm half-failed already, do I beat you?

[nymous_fic]

I KNOW, I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME, AND I'M SORRY. And about not accomplishing anything-- we need a support group. T_T

klabbkaegblkagbkawbklabkwvsval *weeps with joy* Oh, thank you thank you thank you! I will assume that off-beat syntactically-simple means something AWESOME with which to feed my ego, so <33333.

*collapses all over the place* I--I'm so unspeakably happy that you liked that line because, however obnoxious this may sound, it was my favorite too. *dies*

You are not a sap, you are a wonderful amazing wonderful person with an amazing icon. <3333

Also, FINALS, I DO NOT APPRECIATE YOU GANGING UP ON US LIKE THAT. Uncool.

[barnacletree]

HI I'M ALEX, AND I'VE BEEN A PROCRASTINATOR FOR ... EVER. Group: HI ALEX.

It can be roughly translated to awesome, although in some dialects it's more synonymous with aljdsfasjklfgreat.

GREAT MINDS, something about the phrasing - GUH ♥. But I am kind of sap when the mood strikes me. >_> I'm trying to think of some really corny show where I cried as proof.

I'M DONE. DONE DONE DONE DONE. I'M GOING HOME AND VEGGING OUT IN A FASHION SIMILAR TO MY ICON, BUT WITH LESS SHOCK.