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Green-Eye Chapter 2

Dec 01, 2012 13:36

Author: Nympha_Fluminis (River)
Story title: Green-Eye
Rating: NC-17
Configurations: M/m
Warnings: Explicit sex, non/dub-con, slavery
Word Count: ~2800 this chapter. ~4800 total
Summary: In a place where status is decided by eye color, Blue-Eyes are at the top of the social ladder and Green-Eyes at the bottom. Caelum Hale is a cold Blue-Eye ( Read more... )

warning: slavery, story: green-eye, original fic

Comments 9

smile667 December 2 2012, 20:29:42 UTC

Great story. I hope they'll get along. And i'm curious about the whole rebel thing. Anyway, I can't wait for the next part.

nympha_fluminis December 7 2012, 06:00:49 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far :) I'm planning on keeping y'all on edge a little longer about the rebels, but who knows? There's always a really good possibility that what I want to happen, won't :P

berthablue December 2 2012, 21:45:19 UTC

Eldrick is my favorite :D Do we get to hear more about him? I want to hear more about him.

I think the books/parchment/ink work in a sort of historical preservation sort of way. Eldrick seems like the sort of guy that would turn his nose up at a computer and prefer the dusty history of books.

Looking forward to more!

nympha_fluminis December 3 2012, 01:17:42 UTC

Yes, there will be more Eldrick. :) I'm glad you liked him! He's fun to write :P

missingkeys December 6 2012, 10:32:59 UTC

Ooh, rebels! And the plot thickens. Such an interesting story; thank you for updating!

nympha_fluminis December 7 2012, 06:01:28 UTC

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far. I'll try and write the next chapter more quickly than this one. XD

missingkeys December 7 2012, 13:11:22 UTC

*beams* Write at your own pace; I love the way you're thinking out all of the chapters, and I'd never want to sacrifice a good story for a speedy chapter! You're a star.

spirit_dol61 March 22 2013, 20:35:23 UTC

Hey- I was really getting into this story and am worried that you have abandoned it, since there haven't been any posts in over two weeks. Will there be more? I like your story development, so far and you have a good sense of just what I like to read. Well, I encourage you to give your readers another chapter as soon as possible. Thanks much.

nympha_fluminis March 30 2013, 18:34:03 UTC

Hello :) Thanks for your comment! No, I haven't abandoned this, but I am a very slow writer and my updates tend to be sporadic, however I'm not abandoning this. I've just hit a spot of writer's block.
I'm glad your enjoying it, though! :D I'll try and get an update out as soon as possible!