SGA Fic: When I'm 64 (Final)

Jan 29, 2008 21:27

Title: When I'm 64
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17
Category: First time, estabished relationship
Notes: A belated birthday gift for seperis.

I started this two years ago so it veers off from canon pretty sharply in early season three.

Summary:
The first time he woke up to John’s body curling sweet and warm around him was the very next morning, ( Read more... )

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beadattitude January 31 2008, 00:08:41 UTC
This is so beyond fantastic. So many wonderful little details. ::squeeeezes you::

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nymphaea1 January 31 2008, 03:33:57 UTC
I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment.

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ailurophile6 January 31 2008, 00:57:26 UTC
What an absolutely lovely read. Thank you, I enjoyed this tremendously :)

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nymphaea1 January 31 2008, 03:37:26 UTC
Thank you! It's lovely of you to take the time to comment. I truly appreciate that.

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lambourngb January 31 2008, 01:17:46 UTC
What does speed & prolific mean, when you can have quality? Please do not apologize for being a slow writer, because this was well worth the time. It's just beautiful and warm and inviting. I believe I'll be revisiting this story again and again.

My favorite part: the slow reveal of the established and the first time. I just love the idea of them waiting, both of them knowing that there is something there between them, and putting it on hold while they have Atlantis, because hey, no one is going any where, what's the rush-- just the security of their relationship. Even better, is when John has had enough of putting himself on hold (and tucking that part of himself away) and he's ready for Rodney.

“But the city and your job and-I’m trying to be noble here!”

Sheppard put his hand along Rodney’s jaw and stroked his thumb across Rodney’s cheek. Rodney turned into his palm, unable to resist reacting to the touch.

“Maybe I’m tired of noble. Maybe I’ve been tired of it for a while.”

*happy sigh*

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nymphaea1 January 31 2008, 03:44:21 UTC
This comment makes me so, so happy. Because this--

I just love the idea of them waiting, both of them knowing that there is something there between them, and putting it on hold while they have Atlantis, because hey, no one is going any where, what's the rush-- just the security of their relationship.

Yes, yes exactly. They have, as you say, Atlantis and the team and everything and that's good, that's important, but I (probably obviously) love the idea of them having each other after that. When there's time for each other and the knowledge and experience to appreciate it and to be patient and indulgent with each other.

Really, your comments make me *so happy*. Thank you so much

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kiranovember January 31 2008, 01:39:36 UTC
This is just amazing and beautiful and sweet. A little sad, but still and they all lived happily ever after.

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nymphaea1 January 31 2008, 03:45:10 UTC
Thank you so much! I figured they all deserved a little happy ever after all of all that.

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reedfem January 31 2008, 01:48:02 UTC
Fabulous! I was supposed to be studying, but once I started I couldn't put it down. So to speak. I loved it all, from Rodney vs the grocery to Teyla's wedding to that first kiss at the end. You might possibly have made me a little misty when Rodney had his "moment"...

I still have studying to do, but it doesn't seem like such a hardship now. Thanks!

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nymphaea1 January 31 2008, 03:46:18 UTC
Thank you! If it makes you feel any better, I am putting off reading a paper on bacterial effectors myself, so you are not alone in your procrastination.

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